Bong crash bang ! lily me and Alice got pushed out by the swooping time travel numbers we crashed to the ground and landed right in the middle of the Colosseum it was incredible i stood up and looked around so did Alice and lily.
We looked at all the people watching us they seemed to be yelling get out of their lily didn't know why but before we new that we could see a gladiator charging at us with his sharp soured it looked like it was as sharp as shark teeth so i yelled run
Lily ran in circles. Alice ran left and I ran right.
The gladiator seemed to follow Lilly but Lilly was so freaked out she ran like a rocket.
It was hard to see the exit but Lilly yelled exit! Quick go through the exit she pointed to a tiny door we all started running but the gladiator still chased us
We got to the door one at a time Alice was last she pushed her body through but the people in the stadium watching where making such a big racket some rooks fell they where the size of a ant and there were millions of them and Alice got stuck the gladiator was so mad that we came it the middle of a fight with the competitors that he was Evan faster then he was before so we tried pulling Alice through even harder we pulled so hard Alice flung right on top of the sandy land we helped Alice up and we turned around and the gladiator was running towards us.
i found some buckets full of water so i grabbed one and when the gladiator got closer i climbed a mountain of fruit and when the gladiator ran past me i jumped and poured the water on his head and touched the gladiator before Alice and lily where as flat as a pancake we flung in the air right into the time travel pourtle.
Really cool story Norah. I love how descriptive it is! Your drawing is awesome too. It looks just like a gladiator. Could you try to use some speech marks in your next writing? Thanks for sharing your work.
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